i asked
would words be different
if they came from pencils or laptops or typewriters?
so i wrote this poem
three times
in one the sand of our beach was still between my toes
in the other i never wrote what i meant
in the third i measured my poem in meters
what a pity
(read write poem)
so glad you're poeming with us this month!
ReplyDeleteI love the images here. You say so much with such an economy of words.
ReplyDeletevery nice
ReplyDeleteOh I just love this little poem- it packs a wallop! I just had a conversation about how Tweets and FB have really changed how we work. Confined to 140 characters, can we be our big selves?
ReplyDeleteLovely.
I like how this twists and turns in so few lines.
ReplyDeletelove your playfulness!
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