Sunday, April 5, 2009

napowrimo #5: big sleep sleepy

i felt
like an orphan
the first time he hears someone
call him
orphan

(read write poem)
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3 comments:

  1. Linda JacobsApril 5, 2009 at 11:07 PM

    Wow, what a simle! Very effective!

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  2. PamApril 6, 2009 at 5:57 AM

    I love the circular nature of this form. You expressed the power of language very well.

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  3. Wayne PitchkoApril 6, 2009 at 5:58 AM

    once again...its nice. I find it so much easier readin the short poems...as I cant read them all...keep it up

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